Steve Goodman: Facing the Music
by Clay Eals
Corrections, additions
Thanks for the fixes!
At the front of the book's first printing, I asked readers to point out what they think are errors in the text, and I've been delighted to receive messages pointing out where fixes should be made. I myself also have discovered a few. Also, in the nine months between the book's first printing and its second printing, I have made hundreds of additional alterations, updates and additions. All of these changes can be found in the second printing, and I'm listing here the changes that I kept track of, for your reference.
Beyond what you see below, if you spot something in the book's first and/or second printings that you feel needs correcting, please e-mail me at clay@clayeals.com. I will take note of such errors on this site and include such fixes in a third printing, if that comes to pass. See bottom of this page for such third-printing corrections.
— Clay Eals
First page: Added review excerpts.
Copyright page: Changed printing location, added second printing notation.
Contents page: Added wording in last two listings. Also, changed titles for Chapters 10 and 18 to reflect actual titles.
Author page: Rewrote author's note at bottom of page.
Page 30: In footnote 3, closed up the letters "yearn" and "ing" so as to form the word "yearning."
Page 31: Added two (small) photos.
Page 33: Added footnote.
Page 49: In second paragraph, changed "downtown" to "on the South Side."
Page 49: In fourth paragraph, third line, changed "Cabegos" to "Cobegos."
Page 51: Lengthened footnote.
Page 52: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 61: In second full paragraph, fourth line, inserted "of boys" after "7 percent."
Page 63: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 65: In first full paragraph, deleted Richard Lester reference and substituted Peter Sellers. Also, in third full paragraph, addedname of student cinematographer Michael Waitsman. Also, in the last line, changed "Lt. Kiji's Suite" to "Lieutenant Kije" suite.
Page 83: In second-to-last paragraph, changed the second word in the name of the congregation B'nai Joshua Beth Elohim to Jehoshua.
Page 84: In third paragraph, changed the location of McCormick Place to south of, not in, downtown Chicago.
Page 91: Added footnote.
Page 101: In fourth full paragraph, second line, inserted "-area" after "Chicago."
Page 104: In second full paragraph, added listing of Steve as president of his pledge class.
Pages 107-117: Major rewriting of text at top of 107, bottom of 112 and top of 113, forcing condensation of text and re-indexing of parts of these 11 pages. Footnote at bottom of 108 moved from 109. Added footnote on page 111. On page 112, rewrote caption, and added two footnotes to replace the old footnote. Added footnote on page 114.
Page 121: Added photo, replacing photo of Tom Ghent that is moved to page 123.
Page 123: Martin photo flopped and cropped.
Page 127: In photo caption, changed song title to "Southwind Train" to match same title in the text.
Page 133: In footnote 15, changed the McQueen story from apocryphal to true.
Page 135: In second paragraph from bottom, identified Jo Mapes' three offspring as two daughters and a son, not three daughters.
Page 136: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 142: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 145: In third full paragraph and in caption on this page, changed spelling of Harriet Siegel to Harriette Segal.
Page 146: Added photo, replacing photo that is moved to page 242.
Page 147: In third full paragraph, fifth line, replaced the words "the co-writer of" with "a performer on."
Page 151: Added footnote.
Page 152: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 156: In third full paragraph, added that the Juan routine mirrored a routine by comedian Lenny Bruce.
Page 157: Rewrote bottom footnote.
Page 158: In second paragraph, sixth line, changed "northeast" to "northwest."
Page 159: Added photo, replacing pull quote. Also, reworded seventh paragraph from bottom to indicate that Steve had gone out a few nights before and was home when he woke Ron Rosoff.
Page 162: In footnote, changed first name of Volmer Franz to Volmar.
Page 165: In second line, changed first name of Volmer Franz to Volmar. Also, in the middle paragraph, changed Robert Pruter's job to encyclopedia editor.
Page 166: In second full paragraph, changed location of Robert and Nancy Pruter's mother's home to the North Side, not Maywood, where she previously resided.
Pages 169-175: Expansion of text at bottom of page 169 and top of 170, relating to Goodman's Navy jingles, and forcing condensation of other text on these pages. Added footnote on page 169. Added three photos on page 170, replacing pull quote. Added pull quote on page 171.
Page 186: Added footnote.
Page 193: Added footnote, shortened pull quote. Also, in first line of third full paragraph changed membership of British folk group Young Tradition to three members, not four.
Page 196: In first partial paragraph, lines seven and eight, changed "a teenager derided by her peers" to "a lonely woman derided by neighborhood kids."
Page 199: Added photo, replacing photo that is deleted.
Page 202: Added photo, replacing photo that is moved to page 431.
Page 203: Added photo, replacing photo that is deleted. Also, added footnote, replacing a footnote that is moved to bottom of page 252.
Page 205: In first full paragraph, removed the word "eldest" from the phrase "eldest child of his famous dad."
Page 207: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 217: In third paragraph from bottom, changed first name of Chino Pozo to Chano.
Page 229: In third paragraph, inserted the first name of Don before Van Vliet.
Page 242: Moved photo from page 146, replacing pull quote.
Page 243: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 252: Added (lower) footnote, moved from page 203.
Page 265: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 268: Added (upper) footnote, moved from page 267.
Page 281: Added (middle) footnote. The two other footnotes are shortened.
Page 287: In upper footnote, changed the phrase "learned Steve had leukemia" to "heard Steve reference his leukemia."
Page 292: Added footnote.
Page 294: In middle footnote, changed name first name of Bob Peel to John.
Page 312: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 314: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 315: Moved footnote from page 314.
Page 331: Added (lower) footnote. Also, in the fifth paragraph, fourth line, changed last name of Toni Mandel to Mendell.
Page 337: Inserted second through seventh paragraphs, added pull quote.
Page 342: Added (lower) footnote.
Page 345: In eighth paragraph, third line, changed last name of Toni Mandel to Mendell.
Page 346: In third full paragraph, changed third sentence to read, "Steve's version of the last verse opened with 'The winters whirl the windmills 'round,' a flip-flop from Smith's original line, 'The windmills whirl the winter in.' "
Page 358: Lengthened (lower) footnote.
Page 364: Added footnote.
Page 368: In third full paragraph, third line, changed the word "teen" to "loner."
Page 368-369: Moved photo from page 369 to page 368 to make room for added photo on page 369. Footnote formerly on page 368 moved to (upper) footnote on page 369.
Page 371: In last sentence, changed attribution "he says" to "she says."
Page 377: In lower footnote, changed typo "urprised" to read "surprised."
Page 385: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 394: Lengthened footnote.
Page 405: Enlarged and cropped photo from its original use.
Page 406: Entirely rewrote text on whole page, based on having seen tape of show, plus added footnote. In first paragraph, sixth line, corrected Mike Douglas' age to 49.
Page 409: Added (lower) footnote.
Page 425: In fourth paragraph, third and fourth lines, changed parenthetical phrase to "the name of a D.C. neighborhood," instead of "a nickname for D.C."
Page 426: Added footnote.
Page 429: In photo caption, removed the word "at."
Page 431: Moved photo from page 202
Page 436-437: Moved photo previously on page 437 to page 436 (replacing pull quote), to make room for added photo on page 437.
Page 437: Changed photo credit to Sherb Slack.
Page 452: Shortened footnote.
Page 456: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 458: In first complete paragraph, second line, changed "ABC" to "CBS."
Page 464: In footnote 40, changed Sarasota Springs to Saratoga Springs.
Page 469: Lengthened caption.
Page 470, Added footnote.
Page 473: Added footnote.
Page 476, In first full paragraph, fourth line, fixed typo in word "substituion" to read "substitution."
Page 477: In first full paragraph, changed word in quoted phrase to savage "beast," not "beat."
Page 482: Added footnote.
Page 484: In second-to-last line, corrected spelling of last name of Phil Donohue to Donahue.
Page 485: Added (lower) footnote.
Page 489: Added footnote.
Page 496: Lengthened (upper) footnote and added (middle) footnote. Also, in first footnote, corrected Mazzilli's homer to his second major-league round-tripper, not his first.
Page 500, Added footnote, shortened caption.
Page 501: In first full paragraph, 11th line, changed Eddie Cochran song title to "Somethin' Else."
Page 502: Added footnote.
Page 503: Added photo and footnote, replacing pull quote.
Page 508: Added footnote.
Page 510: Lengthened third full paragraph to indicate that Marla Brin, Alan's older sister, was the impetus for getting her mom and Alan to Laury's and that Marla had heard through the grapevine of Steve's leukemia.
Page 511: In last paragraph, changed attribution to Barbara Kushner, wife of Roland Kushner.
Page 528: Corrected pull quote.
Page 529: Added footnote.
Page 530, Lengthened footnote.
Page 533: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 534-535: Moved original photo on page 534 to page 555 and moved photo originally on page 535 to page 534 to make room for added (middle) footnote on page 535.
Page 540: Lengthened footnote.
Page 545: Added (lower) footnote.
Page 548: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 549: In fourth full paragraph, fifth line, changed last name of Max Gale to Gail.
Page 555: Moved photo from page 534, replacing pull quote.
Page 560, Added footnote.
Page 583: Added (bottom) footnote.
Page 587: Lengthened caption.
Page 590, Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 600-601: Moved photo originally on page 600 to page 601 and vice versa. Footnote originally on page 601 moved to page 600.
Page 602: Added (lower) footnote, shortened pull quote.
Page 604: Lengthened (upper) footnote.
Page 609: In lower footnote, inserted "Blair Maclean" before the word "parody."
Page 615: Added (lower) footnote.
Pages 620-629: to make room for three new photos on page 624, condensed text on these 10 pages. Moved footnote originally on page 622 to page 621. Moved footnote originally on page 623 to page 622. Added (upper) footnote on page 623. Moved footnote originally on page 624 to page 623. Added (upper) footnote on page 625. Added footnote on page 629.
Page 631: Changed spelling of last name in photo credit to "Engel," not "Engles."
Page 641: Added footnote. Also, in first full paragraph from bottom, fixed typo in last word of the phrase "pause for the case" to "cause."
Page 644: Added (bottom) footnote.
Page 653: Added footnote.
Page 663: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 644: Moved footnote originally on page 663 to this page, added (lower) footnote.
Page 665: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Page 672: Lengthened footnote.
Page 673: Added (lower) footnote.
Page 675: Added photo, replacing pull quote.
Pages 680-681: Rewrote bottom of 680 and top of 681 to reposition Nelson quote to proper place in footnote on page 673. Lengthened footnote on page 680.
Page 703: Lengthened (upper) footnote.
Page 706: In second full paragraph, corrected spelling of Tiptina's to Tipitina's.
Page 708: Added (upper) footnote.
Page 710, Added (lower) footnote.
Page 713: In first full paragraph, sixth line, changed "11-year-old" to "14-year-old."
Page 713: Added photo and added two (top and bottom) footnotes, replacing pull quote. Also, in the fifth full paragraph, first line, changed "five times" should be "four times."
Page 714: Added footnote.
Page 716: At bottom of page, in lyric to "Penny Evans' Daughters," changed second line, "it's an honor in each year," to read, "it's an honor earned each year."
Page 721: In fourth paragraph, fifth line, corrected Mike Strobel's location to Rochester, New York.
Page 722: Rewrote bottom paragraph that jumps to page 723, to reflect Norm Hacking's death.
Page 724: Rewrote third, fourth and sixth paragraphs and added two (second and fourth) footnotes, replacing pull quote, to include Cubs' 2007 season.
Pages 730-741: Added or edited more than 20 listings in discography.
Pages 742-747: Added 53 names to acknowledgments (see separate Acknowledgments page on this site).
Pages 748-774: Added more than 200 index listings and altered countless others. Photo originally on page 762 moved to page 763. Photo originally on page 765 moved to page 764.
Page C1: Corrected caption to state that Nancy and the three girls are in a Los Angeles recording studio, not a Sloan-Kettering waiting room.
Page C8: Changed credit for the bottom photo to Bob Yahn.
Page C13: In fourth line of upper caption, changed "Cubs exec" to "WGN exec."
Fixes to be made in third printing
Page 440: In the third line, eliminate the stray "s" before the word "Year" in the song title "Election Year Rag."Page 482: In the second full paragraph, third line, the city Peekskill should be Beacon.
Page 611: In the chapter label at top of page, "July 1983" should be "July 1982."
Page 712: In footnote, fourth line from bottom, "1979" should be "1978."
Page 716: In the fifth full paragraph, in the first line "eight" should be "nine," and in the second line, the name of John Prine should be inserted.
Page C16: In upper caption, "Jackson Browne" should be replaced by "Johnny Burns." The index should be corrected accordingly.
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